MicroHelp Library English Notes Item A (could be anything) is compared to item B (could be anything). For example, compare item A, a boy, to item B, a snake. Press ENTER Mastery Learning M E T A P H O R S S I M I L E S (c) 1989 by Allen Hackworth Press ENTER to continue M E T A P H O R S and S I M I L E S Press 1, 2, 3, or 4 1. METAPHOR: a tutorial 2. SIMILE: a tutorial 3. A Test for 4. Main Menu A metaphor is . . . a comparison. Press ENTER The definition is simple. PRESS ENTER English Notes "The boy SLITHERED into the room." The word "slithered" is a metaphor. It compares the boy to a snake. Press ENTER My English Notes In the last example, the metaphor was in the verb. If we said, "His SLITHERING movements were objectionable," the metaphor would be in the adjective. Press ENTER English Notes If we said, "The snake was late again," the metaphor would be in the noun. In all three examples, SLITHERED, SLITHERING, and SNAKE, we have a COMPARISON of a person to a snake. Press ENTER Lets's try another example. Press ENTER English Notes DON'T RUFFLE MARTHA'S FEATHERS OR SHE SHE WILL PECK YOU. Which words do you think are metaphors? Name them before presssing ENTER. Press ENTER English Notes The metaphors are: ruffle, feathers and peck. These words COMPARE a girl to a chicken. Press ENTER English Notes Consider another example: THE CAR GROANED UNDER THE WEIGHT OF THE PASSENGERS. What is being compared here? Press ENTER English Notes Here a car, item A, is being compared to a person, item B. When an inanimate object is compared to a person, this is called . . . Press ENTER PERSONIFICATION When you personify something, you PERSON IZE it. All personification is metaphor, but not all metaphors are personification. Look at another example of personification. THE WEEPING CLOUDS FELT MY SORROW TOO. Which words personify the clouds? & Press ENTER Answer: WEEPING FELT SORROW The next concept is MIXED METAPHOR. A mixed metaphor includes at least two comparisons that do not match. See the following example: BERTHA SUE SLITHERED INTO THE ROOM, BARKING AS SHE CAME. slithered = snake; barking = dog. They don't match. How would you correct this mixed metaphor? Press ENTER Change slithered to trotted or change barking to coiling. Press ENTER The last concept is EXTENDED METAPHOR. In this case the comparison between A and B is extended into the next sentences. An example follows. The metaphors are capitalized. Bertha Sue SLITHERED into the room, HISSING at the stu- dents near the board. MOVING RHYTHMICALLY to the back of the room, she finally COILED into her NEST. Her tongue DARTED IN AND OUT of her mouth as she surved her PREY. Then STRIKING without warning, she said, "You creep!" Everyday she is full of such VENOM. 9 Press ENTER Study just a few more metaphor examples. My father, I wondered why On one occasion at caustic tongue burned The great state of has nourished me always with nothing but milk and honey. Two well-loved, soft, teddy bears, of their days in hybernation. This completes the tutorial on metaphors. We will now return to the menu. Press ENTER Like a metaphor, a simile is also a comparison The only difference between a metaphor and a simile is in the way each is stated. The simile states that A is LIKE B or that A is AS B. The simile uses like or as. Here is an example: HER BODY MOVED LIKE A WELL-OILED MACHINE. In this case, her body move- ment is explicitly compared to a well-oiled machine. Here is another example: MY ROOMMATE, BERTHA SUE, ACTS LIKE SHE HAS MORE AUTHORITY THAN THE PRESIDENT OF RICKS COLLEGE. Compares Bertha to the President. Study the lines below and notice the similes. Like a living fruit Be still like the tree, my season for moonglow. blooming is near. Her looks were per- Be young like a new fect like a single dawn. blade of grass. Like a bucket of warm, Be high like the grey water, Bertha eagle as he hangs on Sue's brain sloshes the air. when she talks. Her touch was soft Be fresh like a like the breath of rainbow. a sleeping kitten. This completes the tutorial on similes. We will now return to the menu. Press ENTER